Thank you so much! And thank you for reccing this on your LJ. :) I usually feel surer of my John voice than my Aeryn voice, so I'm glad she is coming across well. Whenever I write Aeryn I always feel like less is more. If I try to hard to get her to say too much, she sounds less like herself, I think.

And I didn't want to overplay my hand with the comparisons, just wanted it to be a natural conclusion.

And this was really a bit of a challenge - to try and write something that was outside of my normal domain.