Eep! The intention certainly was to induce some heart breaking, but I'm getting a bit worried that maybe I've gone over the top! Thank you for replying despite the trauma!

I had maybe 3 of the 5 scenes planned in my head, almost fully formed. Number five come along after I'd written the rest, and it insisted I go out on a high note. I think it works, as it adds a poignancy to the whole. Oh dear, poor Cam. I did beat him up, didn't I?