Heya :) Glad you approve! I know I was worried about not "getting" the characters. Although I used to be able to "hear" John Crichton in my head I was so immmersed, it's been a while now, lol. And, while I used to know every nook and cranny of FS, I don't actually own the Torchwood DVDs and had to rely on repeats and memory!

And after re-reading a bit, I find myself wanting to expand on some elements, and segue better and change the pacing in others, which I didn't have time to by the due date. I may actually do that, after a bit of time has passed to get me better perspective!

But I'm glad the premise worked for you, and that Crichton did sound right. I was definitely going for the hardened S4 effect!