The opening read perfectly like an ep of Torchwood, with bonus John being captured and interrogated AGAIN, and it's not even his Earth. *sniff*
And Jack & Ianto on their date (!!!). Really, you had everything in this story - drama, angst, h/c, action, scifi, het, slash, humor, and a wee bit of horror to keep things suspenseful (Scarran roadkill, ew!). I loooooved the interaction between Jack & John, and the relationship angst bonding between John & Ianto. Everyone's voice was just spot-on.
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The opening read perfectly like an ep of Torchwood, with bonus John being captured and interrogated AGAIN, and it's not even his Earth. *sniff*
And Jack & Ianto on their date (!!!). Really, you had everything in this story - drama, angst, h/c, action, scifi, het, slash, humor, and a wee bit of horror to keep things suspenseful (Scarran roadkill, ew!). I loooooved the interaction between Jack & John, and the relationship angst bonding between John & Ianto. Everyone's voice was just spot-on.
Brilliant!