Eep, yes, that sentance is a little clunky. To be honest, commas and me never quite know where we stand with each other. I always have the impulse to use far too many. For instance, I could imagine a sentance construction where it reads: "In this early morning, hazy, grey, horizon light, it's hard to believe the day will be a beautiful one."
Does that read terribly or correctly to you? Because I swear I have a blind spot about them sometimes.
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Date: 2005-07-28 10:45 pm (UTC)Eep, yes, that sentance is a little clunky. To be honest, commas and me never quite know where we stand with each other. I always have the impulse to use far too many. For instance, I could imagine a sentance construction where it reads:
"In this early morning, hazy, grey, horizon light, it's hard to believe the day will be a beautiful one."
Does that read terribly or correctly to you? Because I swear I have a blind spot about them sometimes.