You did everything I imagined and more, it's absolutely perfect! An ordinary guy, with extraordinary parents. That last line absolutely did me in, so beautiful and subtle. Had me falling right in love with Zeal as a person and John and Aeryn as parents.
Really, I'm quite speechless that my little list inspired you!
And I can't believe I accidentally sabotaged Evil!John. But it was all for the greater good, this piece is worth a longer wait. Definitely!
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!!
Date: 2004-08-20 11:06 pm (UTC)You did everything I imagined and more, it's absolutely perfect! An ordinary guy, with extraordinary parents. That last line absolutely did me in, so beautiful and subtle. Had me falling right in love with Zeal as a person and John and Aeryn as parents.
Really, I'm quite speechless that my little list inspired you!
And I can't believe I accidentally sabotaged Evil!John. But it was all for the greater good, this piece is worth a longer wait. Definitely!