Evil!John over and out!
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elliejaneWhhee Hee...Evil!John finally posted at Kansas!!! Please go read if you feel so inclined. I am thoughtfully providing a link ;)
Click here for Evil!John
The fic is actually archived on my Teasing Reality site which I put up for the sake of keeping all my Evil!John series easily accessible and in one place. You can access the fic directly here but if you do feel like giving feedback could you maybe pretty please with a cherry on top leave some at Kansas (link also given at end of the fic) as well as any comments here. This is purely mercenary on my part to keep the fic up there and noticeable for as long as poss!! And so that it looks like more than two people have read it!
Thanks to those two people!! To Stars for betaing so wonderfully :) ((((Stars)))
And Agent Rouka for merciless lyrical prodding. Gotta love a girl who prods in rhyme! Or haiku, even. An example - because I think I threatened to one day, and because these are too good to keep to myself... heheh
Eye lashes batting
in greed for Evil!John fic.
Nails drumming on desk.
Or maybe...
Half-melted ice cream
staining the mailman's post bag.
Unfortunate bribe.
Or maybe...
Innocent shuffle
Of high-heeled black boots.
What is it they want?
Or maybe...
Flygirl Aeryn Sun.
In Scorpy's evil claws now?
A server no more.
Captain Evil!John.
See his frozen heart melting
in a bloody spring.
Ancients, they are mean.
Crushed hopes and illusions break
Aeryn Sun's spirit.
And one especially for me!
Chocolate, food of gods.
Your creamy sweetness makes me
happy and chubby.
I responded with this amongst other random rhymes:
It never ends, there
is always more to be writ
Argh! Argh! Argh! Argh! Argh!
LOL
Click here for Evil!John
The fic is actually archived on my Teasing Reality site which I put up for the sake of keeping all my Evil!John series easily accessible and in one place. You can access the fic directly here but if you do feel like giving feedback could you maybe pretty please with a cherry on top leave some at Kansas (link also given at end of the fic) as well as any comments here. This is purely mercenary on my part to keep the fic up there and noticeable for as long as poss!! And so that it looks like more than two people have read it!
Thanks to those two people!! To Stars for betaing so wonderfully :) ((((Stars)))
And Agent Rouka for merciless lyrical prodding. Gotta love a girl who prods in rhyme! Or haiku, even. An example - because I think I threatened to one day, and because these are too good to keep to myself... heheh
Eye lashes batting
in greed for Evil!John fic.
Nails drumming on desk.
Or maybe...
Half-melted ice cream
staining the mailman's post bag.
Unfortunate bribe.
Or maybe...
Innocent shuffle
Of high-heeled black boots.
What is it they want?
Or maybe...
Flygirl Aeryn Sun.
In Scorpy's evil claws now?
A server no more.
Captain Evil!John.
See his frozen heart melting
in a bloody spring.
Ancients, they are mean.
Crushed hopes and illusions break
Aeryn Sun's spirit.
And one especially for me!
Chocolate, food of gods.
Your creamy sweetness makes me
happy and chubby.
I responded with this amongst other random rhymes:
It never ends, there
is always more to be writ
Argh! Argh! Argh! Argh! Argh!
LOL
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Date: 2004-10-29 02:30 pm (UTC)Bad, bad girl. *g*
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Date: 2004-10-29 03:01 pm (UTC)But they are so very good! My personal fave is the icecream bribe...Just.Love.It.!!!!
If you did want me to take 'em down I would. Probably.
heh.
And, oh, I'm getting good feed back at Kansas!! But some folks want more!! My brain can't handle it Cap'n...she cannae take it any morrre!!! (ahem..bad Scottish Star Trek immpresion.lol). Seriously, this darn thing COULD go on forever...thusly it HAS to stop mow. Other wise I shall have no peace at all!!!!
Sighs. The beginning is a good a place to stop as any.
::feedback happy::
:)